Re-writing the beginning a bit to see if it grabs some more attention. The update will come next week, however the basic change is Eric awaking to The Seven in his room on the first page. The beginning is the hardest part.
In the meantime, you can read Chapter 1 and 2 as they currently exist, leave some feedback and help make it better overall.
Chapter 1 http://denizensrealm.blogspot.com/p/chapter-01-eric.html
Chapter 2 http://denizensrealm.blogspot.com/p/denizens-chapter-2-chosen-one.html
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