Alternate Beginnings

Playing around with getting into the weirdness right from the start, started on an alternate Chapter 1 which can be viewed here:
http://denizensrealm.blogspot.com/p/chapter-1-alternative.html

Experimentation

Re-writing the beginning a bit to see if it grabs some more attention.  The update will come next week, however the basic change is Eric awaking to The Seven in his room on the first page.  The beginning is the hardest part.

In the meantime, you can read Chapter 1 and 2 as they currently exist, leave some feedback and help make it better overall.

Chapter 1 http://denizensrealm.blogspot.com/p/chapter-01-eric.html

Chapter 2 http://denizensrealm.blogspot.com/p/denizens-chapter-2-chosen-one.html